Teh Wozzinator

haha, nice job Matt--i wouldn't of done that well...but Snoink was part my idea. lol! well...wait, maybe i said spoink...argh...lol

wait, why is this rated PG-13?

her personality is good..i like how she's torn between being a villain, and being a nice(r) person. i think Jabber took care of most of the typos, and since i'm ...

ok, was good, just a bit confusing, becuase there wasn't much insight to the characters. hopefully later chapters will explain more. um, your thing that says: "Click here to see ...

ok, thanks! the stories that don't say "the magic of chocolate" probably won't be continued--at least not right these are probably better. :-D

ok, aet, i've edited it...maybe i'll post the story on nano, and then you can edit it MORE. lol

^_^ Much much better. Still quite interesting too. =P So looks like I skipped commenting on 3, it was good as well though. My mind is kind of blank lately, ...

thanks aet. umm...i'll see about the edits one thing tho...Gray-side was always spelled with a hyphen

well...thanks for reading....

wow, this is really good. i like the end of the first paragraph (in the first story), and the entire chapter was great, altho the last couple paragraphs had me ...

ah, that's the thing...he doesn't HAVE superpowers (i'll just tell you this now, since it isn't a secret), it's the chocolate that gave it to him...for a limited amount of ...

i know, about the parentheses...i just couldn't think of any other way, so i will probably edit that. this was all written in a short period of time, so nothing's ...

he isn't worried about people coming in from outside...but also from people at the reception area. the darkness was kind of just for fun... and there's definitely security, but they ...

wow, that was really good. the title sounded a little cheesy, but the song was good. i agree with some others...if you ever make a vid, PM me the link. ...

it wasn't bad, but it needs better rhythm, and it was a little short too...i think it needs more detail. that's just me. (i, also, am not normally a poetry ...